Writing my own diary entry

After working with the characteristics and how to write a diary entry, we had to write two of them as if we were survivors of a nuclear explosion and lived in the house of the story we had been working on literature called "There will come soft rains" by Ray Bradbury.
Here I leave my work:

12/08/2026
Dear diary,
It's been a week since the explosion, and I really miss my family and living in my house. I was so used to having a routine and having the house doing so many things for me that now that I moved to a new town, where the bomb didn't make any damage, I don't know what to do or how to do things. I hope thing get better in Allendale, I really liked that place. Maybe one day I could move back there.

12/01/2027
Dear diary,
Five months have passed since the explosion. Yesterday I went to Allendale to see if some progress had been made because I heard that people were going to rebuild it, but to my surprise, the city was exactly as it was when I left. When I saw my dear town, where I grew up, destroyed and uninhabited I couldn't help crying. I cried for hours until I realised that, as much as I wanted to, I wasn't going to be able to live there any time soon. I plated this idea in my head, I still had a little bit of hope. But when I woke up this morning, even though I kept repeating that one day I could go back there and have the life hat I used to, but reality hit me hard, it was imposible to go back to Allendale and live there.

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